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nothing burns like Nothing.

Nothing is a gaping wound
that never really heals.
you can use tourniquet and gauze
and a drug to ease the pain,
but the placebo is just a coverup
because you never stop bleeding.

Nothing is the tyrant
that strangles the meak.
it is the fire in the field
and the famine in the villiage.

where Nothing goes, nothing follows
and no closure comes from Nothing.

Nothing is the abyss
that cannot be filled
by chemical
matter
or thought.

Nothing, once established,
cannot be swayed.
Nothing is steadfast
and relentless.

mortality is just that,
and all earthly things are mortal;
all eventually fades
and rots
and decomposes

and is replaced by nothing
which is, in return, everlasting.

although nothing ever takes your place.
and though it's hard and painful,
we must learn to live with you
vicariously in memories.

but the hardest thing we will ever learn
is how to say goodbye.
©2004-2009 ~micorazonFIF
:iconmicorazonfif:

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a week ago, a close friend of my family's (Jane) son got married. Jane said the couple was very happy, and loved each other very much. i never met david (jane's son.), but always heard of how full of joy he was and how much he loved life. ...on the way back from their honey moon, david and his new wife, mary kathryn, were killed in an accident involving a gas truck. they had their whole life in front of them... they were going to spend their life together. but their lives were ended so untimely... life isn't fair. this one is for them.

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:iconsilentlyobserving:
OK, I felt this one. Most of your other ones, with the metaphors, I'm like "ooh, kitty!" but this one was understandable in metaphor because it doubled back on itself er somethin. Agh, I don't know. I just really like it. Oh, and uh... Hitler was a very bad man.
:sheepish: -me

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Not all who wander are lost...
:iconmicorazonfif:
that is one crapped up looking sheep. haha. anyhow, thanks for the comment and the +fav!
:iconsilentlyobserving:
yep, we should add it to the chester charlie benard gang as... sall the sheep. hehe. anyway yeah, and it really tied in to the romeo and juliet thingy, i think miss crazy (i mean) ashley liked it.
bleh.

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Not all who wander are lost...
:iconmicorazonfif:
haha! yeah... my english teacher is lester holt. if you gave me the book, i bet i could teach the class more in a day than she could all year. she does everything by the stupid book! dah!

anyhow... yeah. the poem tied into romeo and juliet because, well, it was real life romeo and juliet. a wedding and a funeral within days of each other... at the church, the minister reflected on how the same people gathered at the funeral were there 10 days before watching david and mary kathryn get married... 'til death do us part' wasn't very long...
:iconsilentlyobserving:
don't think about it, it's too sad.

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Not all who wander are lost...

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